Small Potatoes
Started by Celeste, 2nd February 2005 02:50 in Poetry, Books & Writing

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    Default Small Potatoes

    A minimalist work.

    Small Potatoes, Celestine Gordson 2005
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    Shopping,
    The greengrocers,
    Potatoes,
    Not very big,
    I,
    Don't care

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    Celeste

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    Nice

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    Default Re: Small Potatoes

    I have decided to revisit this, one of my earlier works, a whole fourteen years ago.

    Looking at it from today's perspective, I have to say that for a minimalist piece it seems over long. I don't think at this stage in my career I had yet fully mastered the art form.

    Today I would probably write this subject something like this:

    Potatoes
    Greengrocers
    Puny
    So?

    However I just knocked that up in less than an hour so the finished piece would be more polished.

    I shall take the original to my poetry group next week and see what their thoughts are on how to approach a revised version for 2018.

    Celestine
    Celestine Gordson
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    Default Re: Small Potatoes

    If you want to mention small potatoes on this forum, you have to name specific posters you believe may have them.
    Some posters will be happy to offer suggestions as to whom.
    Normal service will be resumed as soon as possible


 


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