The depths of winter
Started by Scrotnig, 9th January 2019 19:08 in Talk & Chat

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    Default The depths of winter

    I might as well go in the canal.

    One of the things I checked when moving to this city in 2015, was the availability of a suitable canal to go in, should the need ever arise.
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    Scrotnig
    I might as well go in the canal.

    One of the things I checked when moving to this city in 2015, was the availability of a suitable canal to go in, should the need ever arise.
    Nice Poem.
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    Needs work, doesn't scan or rhyme.
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    Scrotnig
    I might as well go in the canal.

    One of the things I checked when moving to this city in 2015, was the availability of a suitable canal to go in, should the need ever arise.
    Don't choose the NENE, thousands of dead fish reported, indicate it is polluted, you should not drown in that muck.
    The European Union is Nazism under a new banner.
    Perrin is right about Cameron, on everything else he is wrong.
    Fork Me is a decent type, pity he's such a twat!


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    Scrotnig
    Needs work, doesn't scan or rhyme.
    The depths of winter, it's dark and cold
    My life is feeling banal
    I'm only a nipper but feel quite old
    I might jump in the canal.

    Laugh all you like, I'm going to leap!
    Your teasing and mocking still rankles
    The flaw in my plan? The water's not deep
    So I'll just end up spraining my ankles.

    Then you'll feel guilty on hearing my plight
    As I hobble around with a stick
    I shall post of my woes by day and by night
    Till Reg says "fuck off, you daft prick".

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    The depths of winter, it's dark and cold
    My life is feeling banal
    I'm only a nipper but feel quite old
    I might jump in the canal.

    Laugh all you like, I'm going to leap!
    Your teasing and mocking still rankles
    The flaw in my plan? The water's not deep
    So I'll just end up spraining my ankles.

    Then you'll feel guilty on hearing my plight
    As I hobble around with a stick
    I shall post of my woes by day and by night
    Till Reg says "fuck off, you daft prick".
    The gentleman does have a high water displacement count....perhaps you should take that into account?
    The European Union is Nazism under a new banner.
    Perrin is right about Cameron, on everything else he is wrong.
    Fork Me is a decent type, pity he's such a twat!

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    Scrotnig
    Needs work, doesn't scan or rhyme.
    It's a bit Celeste style.
    Just not minimalist.
    Liked by: sphinx


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    I'm going to jump
    In the water you chump
    If the coppers try stop this
    I'm going to kill me (You'll nevah take me alive!)

 


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