"Love is Backward" - my latest minimalist work
Started by Secret_Admirer, 14th February 2018 21:10 in Valentines Forem

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    Hello everyone and happy Valentines Day to you all.

    I have spent the long dark nights since Christmas working feverishly to have my latest work ready for today.

    For it is my first attempt at a proper, traditional love poem.

    This poem captures the desperation and longing of a love struck couple, while simultaneously reminding us that behind love's great beauty lies a raging and insatiable desire.

    It is the product of many weeks of hard work.
    I hope you enjoy it. Constructive feedback is always welcome.

    Celeste

    "Love is Backward"
    A minimalist work
    © 2018 Celestine Gordson

    !EVOL
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    I appear to have made a mistake. I think I flicked a wrong switch somehow, and my post has shown up as "Secret_Admirer". This is NOT correct, whoever this person is they are NOT the author of my work. The work is authored by me, Celestine Gordon, and nobody else.
    Celestine Gordson
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    Celeste
    I appear to have made a mistake. I think I flicked a wrong switch somehow, and my post has shown up as "Secret_Admirer". This is NOT correct, whoever this person is they are NOT the author of my work. The work is authored by me, Celestine Gordon, and nobody else.
    Then you should report the offending post and request it is deleted.

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    Secret_Admirer
    Then you should report the offending post and request it is deleted.
    Good heavens no, I would not want my hard work to be removed from sight.

    I am satisfied that my follow up post will define the authenticity of the work.

    Celeste
    Celestine Gordson
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    Celeste
    I appear to have made a mistake. I think I flicked a wrong switch somehow, and my post has shown up as "Secret_Admirer". This is NOT correct, whoever this person is they are NOT the author of my work. The work is authored by me, Celestine Gordon, and nobody else.
    Don't worry, Celeste. I think most of us would realise that it is indeed your work, and not that of another, as you have such a unique style.
    Plus, the work (which is most inspiring I have to say) is signed by yourself, in your usual style, in the post.
    Thank you for posting it.
    They who walk in silence hang the innocent and set the guilty free.
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    Celeste
    Good heavens no, I would not want my hard work to be removed from sight.

    I am satisfied that my follow up post will define the authenticity of the work.

    Celeste

    Of course.
    They who walk in silence hang the innocent and set the guilty free.

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    sphinx
    Don't worry, Celeste. I think most of us would realise that it is indeed your work, and not that of another, as you have such a unique style.
    Plus, the work (which is most inspiring I have to say) is signed by yourself, in your usual style, in the post.
    Thank you for posting it.
    Thank you Sphinx. I'm delighted that you consider my work to be so distinctive.
    Celestine Gordson
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    Now I wonder if anyone else has any genuine thoughts about the work, and any emotional responses it may provoke?
    Celestine Gordson

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    Celeste
    Now I wonder if anyone else has any genuine thoughts about the work, and any emotional responses it may provoke?
    Clearly not.

    I am disappointed that my travails do not garner greater feedback.
    Celestine Gordson

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    Clearly not.

    I am disappointed that my travails do not garner greater feedback.
    You wouldn’t want my feedback.

 


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