Weather - my latest work
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    Hello

    This is my latest work.

    It is inspired by the awful weather we have been having lately.
    By my normal standards it was completed very quickly - just over a week. I think, however, that the effects are powerful despite this.

    It speaks of the power of nature's weatherly forces, while simultaneously presenting a positive juxtaposition of urbanism and quotidian emancipation

    "Weather"
    A minimalist work
    2017 Celestine Gordson

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    Very interesting. I presume you are using 'RA' as the sun?
    Quite clever really.
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    Heather - my latest work

    "Heather"
    A minimalist work
    2017 Pson

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    The Tendrils of insanity
    History in the crunching of dead leaves
    The ghost of a tyrant Knight
    Haunting the architecture
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    I'm thinking of writing one about a feather but I'm struggling with the rhetoric.
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    Heather - my latest work

    "Heather"
    A minimalist work
    2017 Pson

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    This is really cleaver.

    I like what you have done here, very much. I may bring it up in my poetry group next week.

    How long did it take you to write? Several weeks? Months?
    Celestine Gordson

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    Alice
    I'm thinking of writing one about a feather but I'm struggling with the rhetoric.
    This is much less impressive I'm afraid. It has no structure, and it doesn't scan very well. I'm not at all impressed.
    Celestine Gordson

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    Celeste
    This is much less impressive I'm afraid. It has no structure, and it doesn't scan very well. I'm not at all impressed.
    I don't think Alice had finished writing it.

    I hope your rather scathing remarks have not upset her too much.
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    I don't think Alice had finished writing it.

    I hope your rather scathing remarks have not upset her too much.
    Exactly, it's still in the conceptual stage. You can't rush these things.
    Amusing smilies aside, you ought to realise that beneath what may sometimes appear to be banter, I do in fact despise you. Don't be flattered, my contempt is free to all lefties who support the indoctrination of children. ~ Memnoch, Dec 2014.
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    ISGROI
    He offered, I accepted, he bottled and fled!

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    Masgnificent
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