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Sallybee
2nd September 2002, 15:42
He had magical eyes
The young man in the shop
In Sloane Square,
Green ,touched with a darker colour,
When they smiled into mine
It felt as though a dragonfly had flickered across
Some forbidden lake
Deep down inside
Sending ripples throughout the whole of me.


He was younger than I ,maybe twenty years



For a long ,long trembling moment
I felt as young as he.s:13

Noodle
3rd September 2002, 14:49
sweet

Sallybee
3rd September 2002, 20:02
Thank you Noodle. I'm enjoying your poetry too.s:13

Noodle
4th September 2002, 10:29
cheerss:24